I want your opinion of my compisition " Pollution "

[Renan]

Pollution

Pollution is the strange factor which enters our environment and dirties it. It's one of the biggest, strongest and most dangerous enemies that can't be defeated. Pollution isn't one, but it has a big family. Let's talk about the most powerful two, which are '' Air Pollution and Water Pollution.

Pollution is very glib, it never comes without invitation, but it's meddlesome at the same time. It intervenes in everything. I mean that there is only one reason for pollution,unfortunately, it's " Human". Human plans wars, invents transportation, incicticides and chemicals, discovers oil, smokes cigarettes, lights fires and throws trashes in the public places and seas. Besides, he doesn't take care of what he invents, discovers and uses. He leaves everything without consideration. He leaves trashes thrown for long time and become a crowd for the insects and disease, such as mires.

Pollution is very generous and we are, too. We give, and it pays back. It pollutes everything such as water and air and we drink this polluted water and breathe polluted air, also. Pollution difiles our lives, brings illnesses and also kills people, animals and plants. At the same time, we give it the causes.

Finally, Pollution is " A bitter pill to swallow ". We should know that each problem doesn't come alone, it fetches its friends with it. For example, dystrophy >>>>> weakness of immunity >>>>> illness >>>>> dead. Pollution is the same as the example. Disinterest of our paraphernalia >>>>> pollution >>>>> illness >>>>> dead. So, We should concur with each other to annihilate the main reason. Of course, we can't kill ourselves, but we can reduce the factors. We must conjoin, because " Union is Strength " .

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Best wishes: Al-Fata Al-Momtea.

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[رحيق الجنة]

Thanks
Best regardes

 

 

[أماني]

Not at all. Thank you vry much.

 

 

[Renan]

I did what I could do, You are welcome both of you ( Raheeq and Amani )

Where are you Amani ??
You should be with us.

 

 

[إشراق]

That's good Alfata Almomte'a

Although we must reduce the factors of causing the pollution, we are unfortunately increasing them.
We gradually kill our selves by ours.

 

 

[الجوهريه]

THANK YOU

 

 

[Renan]

Thank you very much for your reaction with my composition.

 

 

[MjNon Taker]

Good job Al-Fata Al-Momtea

I've read all of it , and it amazes me

Lool .. Thank you

 

 

[Renan]

Thank you Majnon Taker for reading my composition. You are always encouraging me.